Transcript between me n Cor Cor

This is the main convo between me n cor cor for the series. njoy.

god damit
12:13 AM
i closed the convo
12:13 AM

Me

Cor Cor
lol
12:13 AM
god damit now i got to type all of the info back in
12:14 AM

Me

Cor Cor
i srry
12:14 AM
ok. so he goes awol from his unit and goes into exile in a village where there are no questions asked about your past. so he lives there for the next couple years and then one day a surprise attack occurs on them
12:17 AM

Me

Cor Cor
ok
12:21 AM
dont kno how to help you, not good with military stuff
12:22 AM
he looks around and sees that children are murdered in cold blood. the villagers are all dead, the elder who was like a father to him since he arived there was murdered. he goes to his bunker and grabs the gun that he hasnt even touched since he left. he cocks it, closes his eyes, takes a deep breath, counts to three, and opens his eyes.
12:23 AM
what he sees is a place where no battle took place. it is the same before it was attacked. no dead, no exploded cars, no nothing. its the same village he lived in for the last few years sans the villagers. no one is there.
12:24 AM
all that remains from that attack is a message on the wall
12:25 AM
''No one thing is safe. You are not free. We know what you will do.""
12:27 AM

Me

Cor Cor
cryptic but good
12:28 AM
u think u can help me work with this?
12:29 AM

Me

Cor Cor
if you give me ideas what to say i can attempt to
12:30 AM
well i want u to help me make a basic story line to work with. from what u got now i was wonderin if u could make a story out of it. me n a friend are doing the same thing. eventually we can combine the story in a way to make a really good one.
12:31 AM

Me

Cor Cor
yeah i can try to see if i can come up with sumthing
12:32 AM
col. now i know that this is kinda pushin it but do you think you can get a basic story done by monday?
12:32 AM

Me

Cor Cor
i can try but if i cant come up with sumthin i'll let u kno
12:33 AM
if not than thats ok
12:33 AM
well we can work together on this.
12:34 AM
what do you see for this right now?
12:34 AM

Me

Cor Cor
well what do u want to murderers to be
12:35 AM
idk. right now i want it all to seem 'like he is going crazy but isnt.
12:36 AM

Me

Cor Cor
then have him imagine things
12:37 AM
welll thats what im avoiding.
12:37 AM
i want it to seem like he is but its a third party messin with his head. sort of a.....idk how to explaine it.
12:37 AM
have u ever played metal gear solid 2: the sons of liberty?
12:38 AM
thats got a good way of saying this
12:38 AM

Me

Cor Cor
no
12:39 AM
ok. u r gana get a link in a min. hold on.
12:40 AM
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_recurring_Metal_Gear_characters
12:49 AM
clickon the patriots
12:49 AM
hello?
12:51 AM

Me

Cor Cor
workin on it
12:51 AM
oh ok
12:52 AM

Me

Cor Cor
kk
12:56 AM
a third party controlling all. pullin all the strings. working behind the scenes. they run it all. not the president. not the goverment. not the king, queen, policeman, or mayor. they are the real power.
12:57 AM

Me

Cor Cor
kk
12:58 AM
and they have a special interest in our little friend
12:58 AM
i think that we can do alot with this
1:00 AM

Me

Cor Cor
yea
1:01 AM
so what u think? u got ne ideas for it?
1:01 AM
these men bhind the scenes have pulled every string and have made history what we know it as 2day. the sunk the titanic, started (and ended) WW1 & 2, brought down the trade towers, brought osama to where he is today, made the airplane, built the country that it is today, that sorto thing. people didnt do these things, these men, these agents did. they pulled every stop they could and we have no say in our lives. it may look it but they control all. they know and play our moves. like a game of chess
1:05 AM

Me

Cor Cor
i'll have to sleep on it for ideas
1:06 AM
ok
1:06 AM
can do
1:08 AM
u like where this story goes? cause if u are not interested thats fine. i just want to kno.
1:08 AM

Me

Cor Cor
its interesting so far